soft light rings
the mouth of a vase
spring rain

4 Responses

  1. cjeandowner Says:

    Beautiful haiku. Wonderful use of the senses and sabi <3

  2. LYNNE REES Says:

    I love how 'rings' creates a visual image and a sense of sound. Lovely unifying rhyme between rings/spring too.

  3. Magyar Says:

    eye and ear
    time each rain drop
    nature rhythm

    __Counting letters.
    __We see, then hear… each drop on crystal; so nicely sensed, Meredith_! _m

  4. Meredith Ackroyd Says:

    Thank you so much for all of your kind and thoughtful comments on this poem!

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