graduation day the upward tumble of starlings
—Wendy Toth-Notarnicola
Issue 23.1 | 20 June 2023
Beautiful imagery!
Gorgeous!
Wonderful use of juxtaposition! Astute use of verb for the starlings and also those graduation caps, sparkling in sunlight, sometimes light drizzle.
Starlings or caps, starlings and caps, both tumbling.
Terrific gift of a haiku for us to read and admire, and feel!
A wonderful haiku, full of feeling!
the downward spiral of ravens
So visual, Wendy! I’ll think of this at my daughter’s graduation ceremony this Friday.
marion
Thank you, everyone. I truly appreciate the comments.
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June 20th, 2023 at 8:28 am
Beautiful imagery!
June 20th, 2023 at 8:28 am
Gorgeous!
June 20th, 2023 at 8:34 am
graduation day
the upward tumble
of starlings
—Wendy Toth-Notarnicola
Wonderful use of juxtaposition! Astute use of verb for the starlings and also those graduation caps, sparkling in sunlight, sometimes light drizzle.
Starlings or caps, starlings and caps, both tumbling.
Terrific gift of a haiku for us to read and admire, and feel!
June 20th, 2023 at 8:42 am
A wonderful haiku, full of feeling!
June 20th, 2023 at 5:35 pm
the downward spiral of ravens
June 27th, 2023 at 1:11 pm
So visual, Wendy! I’ll think of this at my daughter’s graduation ceremony this Friday.
marion
September 5th, 2023 at 8:25 am
Thank you, everyone. I truly appreciate the comments.