season opener
the beer man delivers
a perfect pitch


6 Responses

  1. Mark Forrester Says:

    Love it! Very clever.

  2. Debbie Feller Says:

    You always make me smile!

  3. Mary Jo Says:

    Love this. I put it up on the blackboard
    at home. Many kudos.


  4. martin gottlieb cohen Says:

    Enjoyed it! Reminds me when my older brother took me to the Polo Grounds:

    The Last Polo Grounds

    While passing the steamed dog on a bun covered in yellow mustard and sauerkraut, framed between those poles that seemed to hold the sky, as I rise to see Richie Ashburn stealing third base.

    In the air
    The smell of beer and pea

  5. Anna Eklund-Cheong Says:

    Love this senryu!

  6. John S Green Says:

    Nice! Love a good baseball-ku

    One of my first:

    opening day
    popcorn kernals
    on my seat

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