amid fallen leaves a business card still doing its job
A version of this haiku was previously published in the Texas 09 Haiku calendar.
It was one of the results of a self-assignment to write a haiku a day for one year.
—Janice Rebecca Campbell
Issue 10.3 | 10 November 2010
Very nice, heavy with the poignant ephemeralness of identity.
I really like this. I'm also intrigued about what kind of business card, but that's not necessary to know to find this an excellent haiku.
Alan, With Words
Alan: Thank you for your comment. The business card still doing its job was for an architect.
Hi Janice,
I love that fact too! ;-)
Dirk: I like what you see in the haiku.
oh, this is so clever and so haunting in its imagery. Don't we all see this scene sometime or another! And yet , only you ku-ed it. Hi Janice , i am new here and am glad to read your ku. regards anna9
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November 10th, 2010 at 11:07 am
Very nice, heavy with the poignant ephemeralness of identity.
November 10th, 2010 at 12:44 pm
I really like this. I'm also intrigued about what kind of business card, but that's not necessary to know to find this an excellent haiku.
Alan, With Words
November 10th, 2010 at 8:32 pm
Alan: Thank you for your comment. The business card still doing its job was for an architect.
November 11th, 2010 at 12:57 pm
Hi Janice,
I love that fact too! ;-)
Alan, With Words
November 10th, 2010 at 8:32 pm
Dirk: I like what you see in the haiku.
November 12th, 2010 at 12:39 am
oh, this is so clever and so haunting in its imagery. Don't we all see this scene sometime or another! And yet , only you ku-ed it.
Hi Janice , i am new here and am glad to read your ku.
regards
anna9