leaving the Tokyo subway, a hundred umbrellas rise in unison
—Sidney Bending
Issue 10.3 | 19 November 2010
Entering the Toyko subway A thousand umbrellas bow
Excellent poem, beautiful image. A reflection on interdependent cultures too.
Vivid sense of togetherness – especially love the musical sense in the word choice, "unison"
Excellent! This poem creates a strong image that's not easily forgotten.
Great images come to me with this, neat!
Alan
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November 19th, 2010 at 10:35 pm
Entering the Toyko subway
A thousand umbrellas
bow
November 20th, 2010 at 7:01 am
Excellent poem, beautiful image. A reflection on interdependent cultures too.
November 22nd, 2010 at 6:06 am
Vivid sense of togetherness – especially love the musical sense in the word choice, "unison"
November 24th, 2010 at 2:20 pm
Excellent! This poem creates a strong image that's not easily forgotten.
August 18th, 2011 at 7:57 am
Great images come to me with this, neat!
Alan