sheltered by the bus stop empties
Originally published in where i leave off / waar ik ophoud
—Jim Kacian
Issue 10.3 | 8 December 2010
hi jim this is difficult. sometims my haiku are quite hard to read. i sort of understand yours. but i would say it's an 'almost' marlene
a gust of rain across the water turning up my collar
coolness of spring rain waiting with the bus queue on newly cut hair
Alan Summers
1.Haiku Friends Vol. 3 Ed. Masaharu Hirata, Japan (2009) 2.Mainichi Shimbun 125th Anniversary (haiku contest) Anthology, Japan, (1997) 3.sundog haiku journal: an australian year sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998 California State Library – Main Catalog Call Number : HAIKU S852su 1997 .
alone with the bus stop empties an empty beer can
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December 9th, 2010 at 11:23 am
hi jim this is difficult. sometims my haiku are quite hard to read.
i sort of understand yours. but i would say it's
an 'almost'
marlene
December 10th, 2010 at 7:46 am
a gust of rain across the water turning up my collar
December 11th, 2010 at 5:18 am
coolness of spring rain
waiting with the bus queue
on newly cut hair
Alan Summers
1.Haiku Friends Vol. 3 Ed. Masaharu Hirata, Japan (2009)
2.Mainichi Shimbun 125th Anniversary (haiku contest) Anthology, Japan, (1997)
3.sundog haiku journal: an australian year
sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998
California State Library – Main Catalog Call Number : HAIKU S852su 1997
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April 21st, 2020 at 4:55 pm
alone with the bus stop empties
an empty beer can