art gallery
the rustle of her skirt
on the staircase
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Patricia Prime
Patricia has recently retired from teaching after 30 years, and now devotes some time to the reading recovery programme at her local school. She is the co-editor of the New Zealand haiku magazine Kokako and reviews editor of the online magazine Stylus. She writes short stories, poetry, reviews and articles, and likes to write collaborative poems with other poets.
Contact Patricia: pprime at ihug.co.nz.
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My response for Mrs. Patricia Prime:
I am a Albanian Haiku Poet. Three years ago I begun to composed a Haiku Book and Now I am ready yo publish it. I am sending for knowlegde among us two my Haiku:
I throw a fishline into the lake
and chought
the remembransces of love.
***
shaking of grass
from the freshness of afternoon
confusion’s feelings…
kutjim,
your responses are nice, but i think
you should get a bit more practice
under your belt before you publish
a book. well, maybe in your native
language, but i’d hold off on the
english version for awhile.
pie eating contest
one man won two
pale pails too!
no eye contact…
the critic
asks for a sharpener
his first love
a blue eyed Renoir
in velvet
My response for Mrs. Patricia Prime:
I am a Albanian Haiku Poet. Three years ago I begun to composed a Haiku Book and Now I am ready yo publish it. I am sending for knowlegde among us two my Haiku:
I throw a fishline into the lake
and chought
the remembransces of love.
***
shaking of grass
from the freshness of afternoon
confusion’s feelings…
art fair
I compliment the artist
on work I won’t buy
Patricia’s art gallery is wonderfully suggestive.
I liked this haiku very much.
not a red spot
in sight—
artist blames his muse
very, very nice….beauty everywhere: in the art and the woman with the rustling skirt….
greetings from the great state of
Mississippi!
vicksburg sunoco…
a wall sized velvet elvis
gazes down the road
kutjim,
your responses are nice, but i think
you should get a bit more practice
under your belt before you publish
a book. well, maybe in your native
language, but i’d hold off on the
english version for awhile.
pie eating contest
one man won two
pale pails too!
great wall painting
at the gallery
the echo of footsteps
great wall
at the gallery
the echo of footsteps
misty morn, cross the valley
atop the hill, pine stands alone