shadows fold within shadows of the rose
—martin gottlieb cohen
Issue 11.2 | 27 June 2011
unfolding petals release aroma into the air
lovely
By the way, you should really consider the Snapshot Press Collection Competition which allows for 1 line/1 line haiku as well as three line haiku.
Just google snapshotpress.co.uk
Alan
crimson petals arch into the breath of summer
unnoticed shadows cast by thorns
Great to see T.W. back. M.G.C. always a great poet. Curious on status of summission #7383 never received word.
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ancient, sacred geometry shows it's face through this blessed rose
roses peddle love petals disperse beauty, grace geometric hips
venus love nectar rose belly full of body beautiful in bloom
lamenting her death tear drops like rain drops, nurture finally i see
as tears drop like rain the foliage begins to drink why don't i grow too?
you're always growing though the process may be slow self-evolution
as we all evolve living, laughing, and loving growing in ALL WAYS shapeshifting and evolving 'till we meet the end
we meet the end, omega energy dispersed, collectively wholly rebirth'd, alpha we circle the earth
starstruck and tongue-tied i stumble to follow you linguistically
^^nice 1
Lovely poem, Martin. Good to know you're writing!
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June 27th, 2011 at 12:20 pm
unfolding petals release aroma into the air
June 27th, 2011 at 2:44 pm
lovely
June 27th, 2011 at 3:24 pm
By the way, you should really consider the Snapshot Press Collection Competition which allows for 1 line/1 line haiku as well as three line haiku.
Just google snapshotpress.co.uk
Alan
June 27th, 2011 at 8:35 pm
crimson petals arch into the breath of summer
June 27th, 2011 at 11:23 pm
unnoticed shadows cast by thorns
June 28th, 2011 at 3:27 am
Great to see T.W. back. M.G.C. always a great poet. Curious on status of summission #7383 never received word.
.
June 28th, 2011 at 5:56 am
ancient, sacred geometry
shows it's face
through this blessed rose
June 28th, 2011 at 6:26 am
roses peddle love
petals disperse beauty, grace
geometric hips
June 28th, 2011 at 9:53 am
venus love nectar
rose belly full of body
beautiful in bloom
June 28th, 2011 at 11:42 am
lamenting her death
tear drops like rain drops, nurture
finally i see
June 28th, 2011 at 12:05 pm
as tears drop like rain
the foliage begins to drink
why don't i grow too?
June 28th, 2011 at 12:15 pm
you're always growing
though the process may be slow
self-evolution
June 28th, 2011 at 12:49 pm
as we all evolve
living, laughing, and loving
growing in ALL WAYS
shapeshifting and evolving
'till we meet the end
June 28th, 2011 at 12:59 pm
we meet the end, omega
energy dispersed, collectively
wholly rebirth'd, alpha
we circle the earth
June 28th, 2011 at 1:55 pm
starstruck and tongue-tied i stumble to follow you linguistically
^^nice 1
June 29th, 2011 at 4:34 pm
Lovely poem, Martin. Good to know you're writing!