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11 Responses

1. Aurora Says:
   July 18th, 2011 at 1:05 pm

   Nice work, Andrea!

2. keenetic Says:
   July 18th, 2011 at 1:31 pm

   … Her farewell gift, a letter of folded memories.

3. kala ramesh Says:
   July 18th, 2011 at 7:18 pm

   Lovely, Andrea!

   You caught this well
   _kala

4. @andreochka Says:
   July 19th, 2011 at 3:19 am

   Thanks ALL! Much appreciated…

5. Lana B Says:
   July 19th, 2011 at 3:21 am

   his hand is shaking
   as he crosses line
   in old address book

6. Ekwunife Says:
   July 19th, 2011 at 3:26 am

   Thanks ALL! Much appreciated

7. Bruce F Says:
   July 19th, 2011 at 5:40 pm

   I liked the use of fragrance paired with loss and separation which stirs up deep feelings. Nicely done!

8. Matt Says:
   July 21st, 2011 at 2:08 pm

   I liked reading it: "as she leaves again" and also as: "again the smell of apricots." That really opens it up nicely!

9. Alan Summers Says:
   July 21st, 2011 at 4:46 pm

   Good haiku and great to have the senses tingle while reading by adding scent/smell.

   Alan

10. petertwo.oh Says:
    August 3rd, 2011 at 8:16 am

    Marvellous monostich. // Peter.

11. shaheen Says:
    September 26th, 2011 at 2:38 am

    days after our meet
    the smell of her
    in my room

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