as she leaves again the scent of apricots

11 Responses

  1. Aurora Says:

    Nice work, Andrea!

  2. keenetic Says:

    … Her farewell gift, a letter of folded memories.

  3. kala ramesh Says:

    Lovely, Andrea!

    You caught this well

  4. @andreochka Says:

    Thanks ALL! Much appreciated…

  5. Lana B Says:

    his hand is shaking
    as he crosses line
    in old address book

  6. Ekwunife Says:

    Thanks ALL! Much appreciated

  7. Bruce F Says:

    I liked the use of fragrance paired with loss and separation which stirs up deep feelings. Nicely done!

  8. Matt Says:

    I liked reading it: "as she leaves again" and also as: "again the smell of apricots." That really opens it up nicely!

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    Good haiku and great to have the senses tingle while reading by adding scent/smell.


  10. petertwo.oh Says:

    Marvellous monostich. // Peter.

  11. shaheen Says:

    days after our meet
    the smell of her
    in my room

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