as she leaves again the scent of apricots
Issue 11.2 | 18 July 2011
Nice work, Andrea!
… Her farewell gift, a letter of folded memories.
You caught this well
Thanks ALL! Much appreciated…
his hand is shaking
as he crosses line
in old address book
Thanks ALL! Much appreciated
I liked the use of fragrance paired with loss and separation which stirs up deep feelings. Nicely done!
I liked reading it: "as she leaves again" and also as: "again the smell of apricots." That really opens it up nicely!
Good haiku and great to have the senses tingle while reading by adding scent/smell.
Marvellous monostich. // Peter.
days after our meet
the smell of her
in my room
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