a raven
across the sky
    my wild mind
in his beak

7 Responses

  1. Jan Dobb Says:

    grey fantail
    the erratic flight path
    of my thoughts

    Jan Dobb
    (A Hundred Gourds 2:1, December 2012)

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Good, stormy, reckless.

  3. skyraftwanderer Says:

    That's great right there.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Very atmospheric.

    Alan, With Words

  5. Frances Ruth Harris Says:

    Yes! Thank you!

  6. Paul Heinowski Says:

    This will surely be a classic!

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    'my wild mind in his beak' is such a surprise!


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