Issue 14.1 | 16 June 2014
Thank you for this wonderful wordplay. I see it, hear the incessant buzzing!
This is stunning Jim! and it is perfect with the photo. Bravo!
Beautiful display of words.
Want to add, – I love this poem’s simple elegant “against the blue, against ‘the pane'” and more I wish I could express, beautifully and brilliantly told.
I like therepetitio of blue and the noun-verb shift from fly to flies. a lovely blend of color image and flight.
Great sound and colour in this.I could also see the fly repeatedly hitting the pane.
Real brain power on dilapsy. Thanks for that answer!
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