box of old letters …
from a distance
the owl still sounds close
—Joy Reed MacVane
Issue 15.1 | 6 May 2015
I am in my office grading research papers and I needed to see something deep and meaningful and beautiful and surprising, so I came to tinywords and saw your haiku, and now I have the strength to go on…
My godmother loved owls. I love/d my godmother. I love your ku.
an owl hoots
…the night plays dead
(3rd Place, 16th Kusamakura Award, 2011)
Interesting one with beautiful ku.
moonlight walk; as I trip on my shadow; an owl laughs
>letters, from a distance… the owl sounds close<
__Joy, your fine words promote this feeling, the memories, are much more near_!
keeping owl hours
with the mice
Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
Surprises me …
Wonderful post dear. Thanks for sharing with us.
This is beautiful, Joy.
Perhaps because I've been experimenting with four line haiku recently, I kind of want 'sounds close' to drop to a fourth line. That way you have that wonderful line 'the owl still'. Just a thought.
nice post dear dmin
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