I am in my office grading research papers and I needed to see something deep and meaningful and beautiful and surprising, so I came to tinywords and saw your haiku, and now I have the strength to go on…
Perhaps because I've been experimenting with four line haiku recently, I kind of want 'sounds close' to drop to a fourth line. That way you have that wonderful line 'the owl still'. Just a thought.
May 6th, 2015 at 11:43 am
I am in my office grading research papers and I needed to see something deep and meaningful and beautiful and surprising, so I came to tinywords and saw your haiku, and now I have the strength to go on…
May 6th, 2015 at 1:54 pm
My godmother loved owls. I love/d my godmother. I love your ku.
an owl hoots
…the night plays dead
(3rd Place, 16th Kusamakura Award, 2011)
May 6th, 2015 at 6:36 pm
Interesting one with beautiful ku.
May 7th, 2015 at 5:10 am
moonlight walk; as I trip on my shadow; an owl laughs
>letters, from a distance… the owl sounds close<
__Joy, your fine words promote this feeling, the memories, are much more near_!
May 11th, 2015 at 8:39 am
Very effective!
May 12th, 2015 at 12:50 am
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late deadline
keeping owl hours
with the mice
Alan Summers
Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
May 12th, 2015 at 10:17 am
Surprises me …
May 12th, 2015 at 11:37 pm
Wonderful post dear. Thanks for sharing with us.
May 15th, 2015 at 1:15 pm
This is beautiful, Joy.
Perhaps because I've been experimenting with four line haiku recently, I kind of want 'sounds close' to drop to a fourth line. That way you have that wonderful line 'the owl still'. Just a thought.
marion
August 26th, 2016 at 2:56 am
nice post dear dmin
October 1st, 2016 at 4:41 pm
Good work Admin