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  1. I am in my office grading research papers and I needed to see something deep and meaningful and beautiful and surprising, so I came to tinywords and saw your haiku, and now I have the strength to go on…

  2. My godmother loved owls. I love/d my godmother. I love your ku.

    an owl hoots
    …the night plays dead

    (3rd Place, 16th Kusamakura Award, 2011)

  3. moonlight walk; as I trip on my shadow; an owl laughs

    >letters, from a distance… the owl sounds close<
    __Joy, your fine words promote this feeling, the memories, are much more near_!

  4. This is beautiful, Joy.

    Perhaps because I've been experimenting with four line haiku recently, I kind of want 'sounds close' to drop to a fourth line. That way you have that wonderful line 'the owl still'. Just a thought.

    marion

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