this vagabond life- symmetry in the wings of a butterfly
—Kashinath Karmakar
Issue 15.1 | 22 May 2015
Absolutely lovely! Symmetry stays even as we wander.
Love it.
Love it, too!
Good one, Kash. Fresh and it's nicely done!
__Just my humble echo to your fine haiku, Kashinath; the symmetry, that mirrored image of a butterfly's wings. _m
a monarch its wings on the soft breeze this essence
Niiice KP! Totally unlike your usual, if I may say so
Nice one Kashi- order in disorder.
Thanks to all of you for your inspiring words!It means a lot to me.
Magyar,that is a lovely haiku!
I truly thank you Kashinath; each wing, an essence of the other._m
Wonderfully done! Loved "vagabond life".
Life comes full circle, and one may in the course of things gain the freedom to become a vagabond, flitting here and there……very nice!
Good one! though I must say I did not get this in one go…but on re-reading this I find this absolutely wonderful!
A lovely sense of freedom in this.
marion
. . this vagabond life- symmetry in the wings of a butterfly
—KASHINATH KARMAKAR . Ah, but Kash, we also have symmetry in our wings, if we acknowledge. :-) . . Sirocco winds- the leaves spinning out of butterfly dreams
Alan Summers Scope vol 60 no. 4 (May 2014)
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I liked it so much, hard to express my gratitude to the poet. The lines resonates with me.
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May 22nd, 2015 at 4:02 pm
Absolutely lovely! Symmetry stays even as we wander.
May 22nd, 2015 at 4:39 pm
Love it.
May 22nd, 2015 at 5:46 pm
Love it, too!
May 22nd, 2015 at 7:18 pm
Good one, Kash.
Fresh and it's nicely done!
May 22nd, 2015 at 7:21 pm
__Just my humble echo to your fine haiku, Kashinath; the symmetry, that mirrored image of a butterfly's wings. _m
a monarch
its wings on the soft breeze
this essence
May 22nd, 2015 at 9:47 pm
Niiice KP! Totally unlike your usual, if I may say so
May 23rd, 2015 at 12:33 am
Nice one Kashi- order in disorder.
May 23rd, 2015 at 2:35 am
Thanks to all of you for your inspiring words!It means a lot to me.
May 23rd, 2015 at 2:36 am
Magyar,that is a lovely haiku!
May 23rd, 2015 at 6:13 am
I truly thank you Kashinath; each wing, an essence of the other._m
May 23rd, 2015 at 5:35 am
Wonderfully done! Loved "vagabond life".
May 23rd, 2015 at 6:01 pm
Life comes full circle, and one may in the course of things gain the freedom to become a vagabond, flitting here and there……very nice!
May 24th, 2015 at 3:37 am
Good one! though I must say I did not get this in one go…but on re-reading this I find this absolutely wonderful!
May 26th, 2015 at 3:26 am
A lovely sense of freedom in this.
marion
May 27th, 2015 at 3:36 pm
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this vagabond life-
symmetry in the wings of
a butterfly
—KASHINATH KARMAKAR
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Ah, but Kash, we also have symmetry in our wings, if we acknowledge. :-)
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.
Sirocco winds-
the leaves spinning out
of butterfly dreams
Alan Summers
Scope vol 60 no. 4 (May 2014)
.
July 14th, 2024 at 7:38 am
I liked it so much, hard to express my gratitude to the poet. The lines resonates with me.