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  1. I love the subtle ambiguity I find in reading this verse Ellen. On one reading the poem is complete and self-explanatory. But taking it a line at a time there is a sense of openness and incompleteness that is very potent. Four seasons repeating through a 3-line haiku. Which season of life do we place ourself in? Great poetry, thanks Ellen.

    Strider

  2. I love this haiku! Nicely done. You captured multiple dimensions, physical and metaphysical – expertly written. Thank you!

  3. I loved this haiku from the first time I read it in Mayfly, so it was an extra gift to find it on Tinywords too.

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