Ellen Grace Olinger lives in a small town by Lake Michigan. Her primary blog is Poems From Oostburg, Wisconsin. http:// www.ellenolinger.wordpress.com
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I love the subtle ambiguity I find in reading this verse Ellen. On one reading the poem is complete and self-explanatory. But taking it a line at a time there is a sense of openness and incompleteness that is very potent. Four seasons repeating through a 3-line haiku. Which season of life do we place ourself in? Great poetry, thanks Ellen.
I like this one a lot, Ellen. There is a sense of continuity in the first two lines, but this changes to frustration that we can't really change things in L3.
Explains a lot!
Thanks Grace
I love the subtle ambiguity I find in reading this verse Ellen. On one reading the poem is complete and self-explanatory. But taking it a line at a time there is a sense of openness and incompleteness that is very potent. Four seasons repeating through a 3-line haiku. Which season of life do we place ourself in? Great poetry, thanks Ellen.
Strider
we repeat what matters
winter spring summer fall
I love this haiku! Nicely done. You captured multiple dimensions, physical and metaphysical – expertly written. Thank you!
Says it all. Great work.
Grace, it is good to find your lovely poem here. I will carry it with me all day as a gift. o/
Thank you to tinywords, and for all your kind comments.
I loved this haiku from the first time I read it in Mayfly, so it was an extra gift to find it on Tinywords too.
I like this one a lot, Ellen. There is a sense of continuity in the first two lines, but this changes to frustration that we can't really change things in L3.
marion
waiting for the summer again