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  1. Lovely evocation of the healing power of time. The image of erosion through the use of water and stone is a perfect fit.

  2. Excellent haiku Joan. A perfect "everyday" observation from nature with a powerful application to the human condition.
    I also like how the "shape" of the poem has been also eroded, to a 5-4-4 syllable count, matching the subject.
    Clever and profound. Great poetry Joan.

    Strider

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