shrieking gull falling from a cliff this fear of flying
—Marion Clarke
Issue 15.2 | 8 December 2015
I feel the image & like it!
mute swan
circles the pond
ripples abound~~~
Delighted this works for you, Mike.
I like your mute swan also :)
marion
The repetition of the -ing, so often regarded as a no-no, is exactly right here.
autumn leaves my fear of falling
Bill Kenney
Thanks, Bill. I had hoped it would work here – so pleased you think it has! :)
The repetition of the “f” sound makes this a lovely read. Nicely done Marion!
coastal cliff the flap of wings before waves
Lamart
Thanks so much for commenting, Lamart. :)
Nice monostich, by the way!
A vivid piece, Marion. Effective alliteration. I can feel fear!
Thank you, Theresa. :)
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December 8th, 2015 at 9:09 am
I feel the image & like it!
mute swan
circles the pond
ripples abound~~~
December 9th, 2015 at 8:54 am
Delighted this works for you, Mike.
I like your mute swan also :)
marion
December 8th, 2015 at 9:25 am
The repetition of the -ing, so often regarded as a no-no, is exactly right here.
autumn leaves
my fear
of falling
Bill Kenney
December 9th, 2015 at 8:52 am
Thanks, Bill. I had hoped it would work here – so pleased you think it has! :)
marion
December 8th, 2015 at 10:31 am
The repetition of the “f” sound makes this a lovely read. Nicely done Marion!
coastal cliff the flap of wings before waves
Lamart
December 9th, 2015 at 8:53 am
Thanks so much for commenting, Lamart. :)
marion
December 9th, 2015 at 8:53 am
Nice monostich, by the way!
December 9th, 2015 at 7:08 pm
A vivid piece, Marion. Effective alliteration. I can feel fear!
December 10th, 2015 at 4:02 am
Thank you, Theresa. :)
marion