shrieking gull falling from a cliff this fear of flying
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Marion Clarke
Marion Clarke is a poet and visual artist from Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland. She has been studying and writing haiku for over a decade and her work features regularly in international journals. Winner of two Sakura awards in the the Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival Haiku Contest, and shortlisted in the Touchstone Awards, Clarke?s poetry is included by invitation in two national collections of haiku from the island of Ireland. A selection of her poetry and artwork is at http://seaviewwarrenpoint.wordpress.com/ View all posts by Marion Clarke
I feel the image & like it!
mute swan
circles the pond
ripples abound~~~
Delighted this works for you, Mike.
I like your mute swan also :)
marion
The repetition of the -ing, so often regarded as a no-no, is exactly right here.
autumn leaves
my fear
of falling
Bill Kenney
Thanks, Bill. I had hoped it would work here – so pleased you think it has! :)
marion
The repetition of the “f” sound makes this a lovely read. Nicely done Marion!
coastal cliff the flap of wings before waves
Lamart
Thanks so much for commenting, Lamart. :)
marion
Nice monostich, by the way!
A vivid piece, Marion. Effective alliteration. I can feel fear!
Thank you, Theresa. :)
marion