shrieking gull falling from a cliff this fear of flying


9 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    I feel the image & like it!

    mute swan

    circles the pond

    ripples abound~~~

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Delighted this works for you, Mike.

    I like your mute swan also :)


  3. chief276 Says:

    The repetition of the -ing, so often regarded as a no-no, is exactly right here.

    autumn leaves
    my fear
    of falling

    Bill Kenney

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Thanks, Bill. I had hoped it would work here – so pleased you think it has! :)


  5. Lamart Cooper Says:

    The repetition of the “f” sound makes this a lovely read. Nicely done Marion!

    coastal cliff the flap of wings before waves


  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Thanks so much for commenting, Lamart. :)


  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Nice monostich, by the way!

  8. Theresa C. Says:

    A vivid piece, Marion. Effective alliteration. I can feel fear!

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Thank you, Theresa. :)


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