Chief, I sense and agree as you have written here, 'tis the kids that are the most important; the schoolyard swings.
__ Consider… though we cannot change the weather, we must control the way in which we swing into its wind. _m
full swings
sway into the colder winds
today's teacher
November 8th, 2016 at 9:07 am
Nice.
November 8th, 2016 at 10:17 am
I concur. It's very nice…
November 8th, 2016 at 2:39 pm
Thanks, Dirk and Andrea. The kids were there this morning, too.
Blessings, Bill
November 8th, 2016 at 5:18 pm
Watching the darling closings at the polls.
Really enjoyed your haiku today.
November 8th, 2016 at 6:37 pm
Was supposed to be early closings.
November 9th, 2016 at 8:15 am
Chief, I sense and agree as you have written here, 'tis the kids that are the most important; the schoolyard swings.
__ Consider… though we cannot change the weather, we must control the way in which we swing into its wind. _m
full swings
sway into the colder winds
today's teacher
November 15th, 2016 at 10:32 am
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election day
kids in the schoolyard
playing tag
—BILL KENNEY
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At any other time this could be simply read on a literal level where the children have no need to worry about election results.
Now 'tag' comes into its own, and we will see who is tagged, and how.
Subtle layers from a master haiku/senryu writer.
warm regards,
Alan
April 11th, 2017 at 9:31 am
Thanks, Dirk and Andrea. The kids were there this morning, too.
Blessings, Bill