first light a strand of her hair between my lips
—Chen-ou Liu
Issue 17.1 | 1 May 2017
I love this poem! So suggestive. And delicate.
Very evocative. Nicely done!
Lovely!
Definitely delicate and evocative. Yet so many things are left unsaid. The direction is right in place. The morning will soon follow. Absolutely interesting.
sun trap lighting up strands of grey
(Notes from the Gean 4, March 2010)
Few poems manage to be simultaneously romantic and erotic, Chen-ou, but you've done it, my man! Bill K
Congratulations on a delightful ku, Chen-ou!
Wow! You've nailed it in this one, Chen-ou. :)
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May 1st, 2017 at 8:32 am
I love this poem! So suggestive. And delicate.
May 1st, 2017 at 10:01 am
Very evocative. Nicely done!
May 1st, 2017 at 3:46 pm
Lovely!
May 2nd, 2017 at 3:54 am
Definitely delicate and evocative. Yet so many things are left unsaid. The direction is right in place. The morning will soon follow. Absolutely interesting.
May 2nd, 2017 at 8:06 am
sun trap
lighting up
strands of grey
(Notes from the Gean 4, March 2010)
May 2nd, 2017 at 10:05 am
Few poems manage to be simultaneously romantic and erotic, Chen-ou, but you've done it, my man! Bill K
May 2nd, 2017 at 11:12 pm
Congratulations on a delightful ku, Chen-ou!
May 8th, 2017 at 3:10 am
Wow! You've nailed it in this one, Chen-ou. :)
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