Claudette, this rainy day landscape really is marvelous. The mood is set in the first line and then amplified dramatically. Isolation and solitude. Well done!
Each and every line has it's own way of telling everything.
Rainy day – It was raining throughout the day.
My loneliness – Since it was raining I was not able to move outside and as a result there was a desire that made it's way. What if it was possible to move out in this rain.
Stays inside – After going through all the pros and cons I decided to say inside home and wait for rains to stop.
June 6th, 2017 at 9:15 am
Claudette, this rainy day landscape really is marvelous. The mood is set in the first line and then amplified dramatically. Isolation and solitude. Well done!
June 7th, 2017 at 3:51 am
Each and every line has it's own way of telling everything.
Rainy day – It was raining throughout the day.
My loneliness – Since it was raining I was not able to move outside and as a result there was a desire that made it's way. What if it was possible to move out in this rain.
Stays inside – After going through all the pros and cons I decided to say inside home and wait for rains to stop.