rainy day
my loneliness
stays inside

3 Responses

  1. Michelle Schaefer Says:

    Claudette, this rainy day landscape really is marvelous. The mood is set in the first line and then amplified dramatically. Isolation and solitude. Well done!

  2. aniketnikhade Says:

    Each and every line has it's own way of telling everything.

    Rainy day – It was raining throughout the day.

    My loneliness – Since it was raining I was not able to move outside and as a result there was a desire that made it's way. What if it was possible to move out in this rain.

    Stays inside – After going through all the pros and cons I decided to say inside home and wait for rains to stop.

  3. martin1223 Says:

    day moon
    the night stays in the lake

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