green fields flooded the train passing a station without stopping


3 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    At first I read green field flooded the train–Wow. Back up. Really like the way you juxtaposed the flooded green fields and that train that didn't stop.

    Cheers, Danny.

  2. Peggy French Says:

    I really liked this!

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful, love train haiku! I like the play on words, and of course during the great floods in Britain it was almost as if trains would be flooded.
    sun flickering corn stubble a train pulls a little sky

    Alan Summers
    Anthology credit: International Multilingual Poetry Anthology Amaravati Poetic Prism 2016

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