green fields flooded the train passing a station without stopping

 

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Danny Blackwell

Danny Blackwell is a British-born writer, who has spent the last 15 years living in Spain, Japan, Argentina, Portugal, and Mexico. He has recently had poems selected for publication in Frogpond, Modern Haiku, Prune Juice, and various other journals. His published work is featured here: http://dannyblackwell.blogspot.com.es And you can follow him here on Facebook: https://m.facebook.com/dannyblackwellauthor/

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  1. At first I read green field flooded the train–Wow. Back up. Really like the way you juxtaposed the flooded green fields and that train that didn't stop.

    Cheers, Danny.

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  3. Wonderful, love train haiku! I like the play on words, and of course during the great floods in Britain it was almost as if trains would be flooded.
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    sun flickering corn stubble a train pulls a little sky

    Alan Summers
    Anthology credit: International Multilingual Poetry Anthology Amaravati Poetic Prism 2016

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