a shift
in the breeze…
lilacs


12 Responses

  1. Janice Campbell Says:

    Just enough.

  2. Dan Curtis Says:

    Thank you, Janice!

  3. Magyar Says:

    Seasons sash.

  4. Dan Curtis Says:

    A different perspective. Thank you.

  5. Magyar Says:

    My post of May 18… that sash of graduation; smiles. _m

  6. Joanne Morcom Says:

    lilacs in bloom …
    no need for a spring
    vacation

  7. Dan Curtis Says:

    True!

  8. Theresa C. Says:

    Very nice sensory details in your poem, Dan!

  9. Dan Curtis Says:

    Thank you, Theresa!

  10. janewilliams Says:

    I love this. As Janice said, 'just enough' … just enough to suggest so much more; possibilities for incremental change in all of us when we are attentive in nature perhaps … sometimes all it takes is a shift in the breeze to shift our mood … Delightful in the deepest way.

    window light
    over my bed head
    flower moon

  11. Dan Curtis Says:

    Thank you so much for your kind comments, Jane.

  12. martin1223 Says:

    the day moon draws closer tsunami

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