dusk crawls across the field crickets


9 Responses

  1. Lynne Says:

    Oh, so lovely. And I can feel the heat of a summer evening in those cricket voices too.

  2. Alan Summers Says:

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    I'm always a sucker for a poem that mentions dusk!

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    dusk crawls across the field crickets

    —MARY JO BALISTRERI

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    Certain verbs can take away the power of a haiku, while others elevate them. Crawls is a great verb choice, and together with dusk, and I've seen it crawl, this is a great "movement" haiku!

    Alan

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Me too, Alan!

    I could almost see the dusk creeping over each stem of wheat.

    marion

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    :-)

  5. pdfrench55 Says:

    Excellent! Really enjoyed this.

  6. Mojde Says:

    Nice!
    Start of wakefulness …
    Sound of darkness …

  7. Mary Jo Says:

    Thank you for your kind comments.

  8. Michael Schoenburg Says:

    ocean waves

    dusk falls

    shadows the sand 🌅🏖

  9. Marie Louise Munro Says:

    So lovely!

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