dusk crawls across the field crickets
—Mary Jo Balistreri
Issue 19.1 | 31 July 2019
Oh, so lovely. And I can feel the heat of a summer evening in those cricket voices too.
I'm always a sucker for a poem that mentions dusk!
—MARY JO BALISTRERI
Certain verbs can take away the power of a haiku, while others elevate them. Crawls is a great verb choice, and together with dusk, and I've seen it crawl, this is a great "movement" haiku!
Me too, Alan!
I could almost see the dusk creeping over each stem of wheat.
Excellent! Really enjoyed this.
Start of wakefulness …
Sound of darkness …
Thank you for your kind comments.
shadows the sand 🌅🏖
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