this ragged rhythm counting the beats per minute late summer dusk
—Beverly Acuff Momoi
Issue 19.2 | 8 October 2019
This is so poignant and reminds me of my dad, being with him, counting the beats…
heartbeat the sun’s edge on the ice
Love this poem! The ragged rhythm of it. The first two lines are 5/7 And then…4..! Just right. For the end af a raggedcsummer Beverly. A beauty.
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October 8th, 2019 at 3:00 pm
This is so poignant and reminds me of my dad, being with him, counting the beats…
October 8th, 2019 at 3:15 pm
heartbeat
the sun’s edge on the ice
October 8th, 2019 at 9:09 pm
Love this poem! The ragged rhythm of it. The first two lines are 5/7
And then…4..! Just right.
For the end af a raggedcsummer Beverly. A beauty.