Nice one, Ben… this strikes home to me because of the social requirement nowadays, such as schooling-kids-from-home. The wild of coyote speaks to my resistance to other burdens, even while those other burdens justifiably tug. Your haiku makes it all resonate.
Ah, a trickster, like Loki? We all have the calling of the original dog somewhere inside us, and a full moon helps.
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a dog all smiles
can't wait to say hello
we talk secretly
Alan Summers
Weird Laburnum ed. Michael O’Brien September 9th Monday 2019
from The “Surrealism as Truth series” in association with “the dogs of name.”
October 26th, 2020 at 8:45 am
Enjoyed your poem!
snowmelt
the taste of air
in moonlight
October 26th, 2020 at 10:01 am
Ben, I love your juxtaposition! Made me say aha!
October 26th, 2020 at 11:21 am
Ben Gaa, Opened a new window. Thank you.
And Martin1234, is that piece yours or Ben Gaa?s? It?s lovely.
October 26th, 2020 at 11:27 am
Nice one, Ben… this strikes home to me because of the social requirement nowadays, such as schooling-kids-from-home. The wild of coyote speaks to my resistance to other burdens, even while those other burdens justifiably tug. Your haiku makes it all resonate.
October 26th, 2020 at 12:11 pm
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not yet ready
to head back inside
coyote mind
—BEN GAA
Ah, a trickster, like Loki? We all have the calling of the original dog somewhere inside us, and a full moon helps.
.
a dog all smiles
can't wait to say hello
we talk secretly
Alan Summers
Weird Laburnum ed. Michael O’Brien September 9th Monday 2019
from The “Surrealism as Truth series” in association with “the dogs of name.”
dog star
I throw myself
a bone
Alan Summers
unpublished.