crepuscular light
the first puff of pine smoke
enters the hive

3 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    day-end camp fire
    as smoke curtains this bee's nest
    tea kettle alert

    __We sip the tea, as bees sneese in the rising smoke. Just a nifty thought of our old times; my wife and I, offer our complete thanks, Julie_!

  2. Julie Mellor poet Says:

    What a lovely response Magyar. Thank you for sharing your poem – it is the perfect companion piece. All good wishes. Julie x

  3. Magyar Says:

    __ My appreciation Julie, for your kind comment! _m

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