lacing the breeze the sunlight a spider spins
—Michele Root-Bernstein
Issue 22.1 | 1 June 2022
I love the "s" sounds of the breeze and of the spinning spider. The "i" sounds weave through the lines, as well, contributing to the lightness and delicacy and movement of this poem.
This is a perfect ku. One I strive to craft. So satisfied to read this beauty!
Like this very much!
Delightful!
I love this, Michele! Thank you.
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June 1st, 2022 at 9:06 am
I love the "s" sounds of the breeze and of the spinning spider. The "i" sounds weave through the lines, as well, contributing to the lightness and delicacy and movement of this poem.
June 1st, 2022 at 10:02 am
This is a perfect ku. One I strive to craft. So satisfied to read this beauty!
June 1st, 2022 at 10:27 am
Like this very much!
June 1st, 2022 at 12:45 pm
Delightful!
June 2nd, 2022 at 12:03 pm
I love this, Michele! Thank you.