lacing the breeze
the sunlight
a spider spins


5 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    I love the "s" sounds of the breeze and of the spinning spider. The "i" sounds weave through the lines, as well, contributing to the lightness and delicacy and movement of this poem.

  2. Nancy Rapp Says:

    This is a perfect ku. One I strive to craft. So satisfied to read this beauty!

  3. martin1223 Says:

    Like this very much!

  4. Dawn Apanius Says:


  5. Valorie Woerdehoff Says:

    I love this, Michele! Thank you.

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