fence line the laughter of violets

5 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    stone wall voids
    flowers growing within those gaps
    the rabbit smiles

    __ Sandi… your input imagins far beyond your few words. I, the rabbit, sends thanks you! _m

  2. ingridbaluchi Says:

    What does this lovely haiku mean, I wonder? Violets have faces like pansies, seemingly to smile. But there's a barrier here — a fence. Do they smile in spite of this barrier, and put us to shame, we humans with our war-like ways, or are they saying 'in spite of all, we (flowers) are still here?'
    I feel there's optimism here, and thank you for it, Sandi.

  3. Marilyn Says:

    OMG! This is wonderful!

  4. Marion Clarke Says:

    Ha! A great monoku, Sandi.


  5. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Beyond beautiful, Sandi.

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