our memories of him so very different swirling snowflakes
—Cara Holman
Issue 13.1 | 26 February 2013
very nice.
The second line acts as a good pivot… nicely done!
the snowflakes swirling are wonderful to juggle many thoughts in the air., the many memories and so different too.
This is a very memorable haiku about Frosty the Snowman.
Thank you all for your comments!
So much detail in so few words.
Yes, I like also like the pivot here.
thanks your tips
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February 26th, 2013 at 11:07 am
very nice.
February 26th, 2013 at 11:24 am
The second line acts as a good pivot… nicely done!
February 26th, 2013 at 11:39 am
the snowflakes swirling are wonderful to juggle many thoughts in the air., the many memories and so different too.
February 26th, 2013 at 12:29 pm
This is a very memorable haiku about Frosty the Snowman.
February 26th, 2013 at 11:14 pm
Thank you all for your comments!
February 27th, 2013 at 1:07 am
So much detail in so few words.
February 27th, 2013 at 2:59 pm
Yes, I like also like the pivot here.
June 14th, 2013 at 9:49 am
thanks your tips